dilluns, 9 de febrer del 2009

my first day of secondary school

First, I got my friends together and we walked to school. We resd the group list and we belonged to the group 1E. In the playground my friends and I walked along the lane. And finally, I and my friends went home.

2 comentaris:

Sònia ha dit...

That's good, but find some mistakes; for example: secondary.

Now you have to write about Darwin

Sònia ha dit...

Please, place your videos at the bottom of the blog, leave your writing at the top.
Thanks